Listen Closely

Listen Closely

A Poem by Kathrine Rethorn
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Raise your children well, they are the future.

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Close your eyes little baby
Let Mommy Rock you to sleep.
The world is scary little baby
Mommy hates to hear you weep.
Keep quiet little baby
When the demons come out to play.
Stay hidden little baby
Maybe they won't steal you away. 
Stay safe, stay pure little baby
You are the future. 

© 2017 Kathrine Rethorn


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Clever poem. Your writing almost makes me believe that there are demons out there.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Kathrine Rethorn

6 Years Ago

Weather they are metaphorical or physical they are there.
Well written! Simply grand! I can hear the musicality in this, and the cherry on top is that the last rhyme is not what it seems.....I had to do a double take to see what was going on, and found it rather interesting.... breaking structure on for the last little bit. Well done!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Kathrine Rethorn

6 Years Ago

Thank you!, Im so glad some one feels the same as I do. I always feel that it help to startle the re.. read more
This is really an important message, something that brings peace. The world is reaching a stage where it seems no place is safe other than mother's. But we all hope in humanity and things will change for the better and for our future generations...

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I am sure that Mother will be the protector. Down the ages this HAS to be true.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yes, the world is a scary place and only getting more frightening.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Kathrine Rethorn

7 Years Ago

Day by day its getting worse. Wish we could all just get along. Thanks for the visit!

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Added on January 24, 2017
Last Updated on January 24, 2017
Tags: Real, children, thoughts, normal, chill, short, poem, world

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Kathrine Rethorn
Kathrine Rethorn

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My name is Kathrine Rethorn. Obviously, I am a writer. Stories and poems. I focus on realistic horror, romance, occasional erotica and mystery. Themes are usually dark or serious. I have some hobbie.. more..

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