morbidity

I see you shine, oh shine away

Let you shimmer in the day

I hoist my sail and sail away

over your sparkling waters I turn and sway

Your fathomless pools, oh let me drown

in this ardor warmth that I have found

oh! let me fall unto your ground

you may have my every pound

i love your ways so morbidly

they're grotesque and they're sickening

you open up so deftly

your movements are so velvety;

I cannot take this any longer

you play my strings like they were hunger

this driving pulse it makes me suffer

you catch me in an oblivious stupor.

Reviews

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

reads like a song~ very well composed rhyme scheme~ truly lyrical~