Broken (10-15-16)

Broken

When the unbreakable breaks

It's hard to mend

The fragments rend and rend

Tiny and sharp

Shattered beyond hope

Must be remade

Don't want to become

Something new

Trapped in a Smelting pot

Reviews

[Paul Bell]

Always wonder why people have to mend themselves.
It breaks for a reason.

[Davidgeo]

I love the essence of this but the rhyme scheme goes to pot at the end. You should spend some more time on this, it could be more bad a*s.

[Chris]

a fairly apt depiction... appropriate word choices as well.

[Ana Papaya]

When something breaks, it can be fixed even though it will never be the same.

[Katseye]

People can't necessarily be fixed, they have to remake themselves.

[Ana Papaya]

however you wish to interpret 'fixed'...