Longing

Longing

A Poem by Katsura
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A poem about wanting something you can't have.

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As I reach
Further than I could ever hope to touch
I realize

This dream
This thing that I want with all my heart
Is not mine

And never will be.

© 2019 Katsura


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I like this poem. It reminds people that are struggling that even if you are falling in a bottomless pit, there is still hope.

But I also like how the second part basically states, hey you can have a dream, but is it really yours or was it given to you?

Anyway, I really like how simple short, and emotionally impacting this poem was.

Keep up the wonderful work Katsura!!!

P.S. I love your name (^U^)

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I like this poem. It reminds people that are struggling that even if you are falling in a bottomless pit, there is still hope.

But I also like how the second part basically states, hey you can have a dream, but is it really yours or was it given to you?

Anyway, I really like how simple short, and emotionally impacting this poem was.

Keep up the wonderful work Katsura!!!

P.S. I love your name (^U^)

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nothing wrong with reaching, even if there's no chance.
Shows great expectations.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Katsura

5 Years Ago

Unless you reach for the stars and fall off the roof.
Full of emotions, the way you express them is precious

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Rye
such a sad write really, nicely expressed though

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I could feel the disappointment within this wish filled poem.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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