Slow Down

Slow Down

A Poem by Kawaiikitty96
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A reflection on how fast-paced society has become.

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Slow Down
There is no need
To increase speed
Let's take it nice and slow

When the pedal's pressed
You cannot rest
We need to just go with the flow

Haste leads to waste
And life's not a race
Why do we hurry so?

© 2014 Kawaiikitty96


Author's Note

Kawaiikitty96
I know it's a little short, but I felt the need to reflect on our fast-paced society. These days, we seem to be really focused on speed. In school, your ability to complete assignments in a certain amount of time is what earns you credibility. We're required to come to school and work ridiculously early, which causes unnecessary haste, which leads to frustration. People want to begin a serious relationship within what seems like hours of knowing each other. Why do we put so much emphasis on rapidity? What people fail to realize is that the sayings, "Slow & steady wins the race," and, "Haste makes waste," are indeed true and profound statements. We need time to appreciate the beauty of life. Why rush so much?

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You did great! The only really bad poetry in the world is that which is never written out of timidity. You busted through that gate and actually put pen to paper (or finger to key,) an act that puts you in an elite minority. Most people are contented to simply believe that it's all too complex and that they ought not even bother. As a person who took a risk in exposing her work, you're officially fighting the good fight! Your poem was a lament of a society that can't slow down; and in slowing down to create beauty, you exemplified your own beliefs right where all your readers could see, dispelling any hint of hypocrisy.

Thanks for your submission and may the New Year bring the birth of many more of your poems.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kawaiikitty96

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much! I was hoping someone would take the time to review this poem. Your review was ver.. read more



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I have no words.....my voice is in my awe! Absolutely amazing! Well done!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kawaiikitty96

5 Years Ago

I'm so glad you liked it! Thanks!
emipoemi

5 Years Ago

my pleasure.
Short and sweet, I liked the message which was behind the poem about society always moving too fast. What most people fail to understand is that the journey is the best part of the race hitting the finish line is the bonus.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kawaiikitty96

9 Years Ago

Very true indeed. Thanks! :)
You did great! The only really bad poetry in the world is that which is never written out of timidity. You busted through that gate and actually put pen to paper (or finger to key,) an act that puts you in an elite minority. Most people are contented to simply believe that it's all too complex and that they ought not even bother. As a person who took a risk in exposing her work, you're officially fighting the good fight! Your poem was a lament of a society that can't slow down; and in slowing down to create beauty, you exemplified your own beliefs right where all your readers could see, dispelling any hint of hypocrisy.

Thanks for your submission and may the New Year bring the birth of many more of your poems.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kawaiikitty96

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much! I was hoping someone would take the time to review this poem. Your review was ver.. read more

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