Did I do good this time?

Did I do good this time?

A Poem by DarkStar

Did I do good this time?
I say I don't care what you think,
That I write only for me,
But I post it online, you see.
With the hidden question,
Did I do good this time?

I wait, phone in hand, staring at screens.
For the praise of someone I never met,
Well in the knowledge you'll quickly forget,
The words they just read.
But still with the question,
Did I do good this time?

© 2018 DarkStar


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DarkStar
Thanks for reading:)

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Hahhahahha, this poem really describes me at times! I think it's just human nature to want other people to recognize the things you put effort into. Well, to answer your question, you did do good this time!

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DarkStar
DarkStar

Manchester, United Kingdom



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I also put pieces on other sites, under the names of DD. and DarkStar7 - So if you see those names on other sites, then you may just have found me! ---------------------------------------------------.. more..

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A Poem by DarkStar