It's all so painfully simple

It's all so painfully simple

A Poem by DarkStar

It's all so painfully simple, until you ask me to explain it, then it becomes complex beyond what I know how to say. And because before you asked, I understood it all so well, I'm bored of how I feel, believe me. But please try to remember, that I can't run away from how I feel like you can.

© 2018 DarkStar


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DarkStar
Thanks for reading x

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I like what you have conveyed here, but I wish you had presented it in shorter lines. I think by doing that, it would have greater impact on the reader.

Chris

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DarkStar

5 Years Ago

Thanks. Was a going for confusion but I see what you mean
Chris Shaw

5 Years Ago

Your call, mine a suggestion :)
DarkStar

5 Years Ago

Thanks again x

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DarkStar
DarkStar

Manchester, United Kingdom



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I also put pieces on other sites, under the names of DD. and DarkStar7 - So if you see those names on other sites, then you may just have found me! ---------------------------------------------------.. more..

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A Poem by DarkStar