Stranger On My Front Porch

Suddenly it was a noise coming from my front porch and it seem very unbelievable - because it was a man. He was sitting in our chair with a blanket over his body. I said "HEY, WHY ARE YOU SITTING ON MY PORCH FOR?!" He looked at me with big brown eyes and said "I thought my friend lived here". So I told him to get off my porch before I call the police, he jumped off the porch and it seem like he was flying with those big brown eyes! Watch Out For The Man With The Big Brown Eyes  Sitting On The Porch!

Funny.

-K.
1/13/2016

Reviews

[Archia]

Nice short story, it makes you wonder about this man (and whether he may have been something else also), and what he was doing there. Just a small thing, when you have dialogue and it's a new speaker they should be on a new line. It makes it clearer to read. Oher than that you told a fun story in a few words, good job.