FLABBERGASTED

Like an angel, she suddenly appeared.
 With her face so charming and totally magnificent.
My heart immediate pause beating.
 My mind was captured in its hastiness.
 I couldn't believe what I'm seeing.
 Am I in heaven or paradise in earth?
 Cos' I'm so confused if I'm still living,
Or Am I falling in love with an angel?

 Why did my legs stopped moving?
 Why is my mouth opening so loosely?
My head was turning slowly as she passes by.
 Making me so speechless like over-happy man.
I was calling out to her but she didn't answer.
I tried to touch her but immediately disappeared.
 Still looking around in a total higgledy-piggledy,
 When I woke up to find out that it's only a dream.

Author's Note

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