I Would Never

Deep down you knew better then to lurk the same familiar territory. Was it change that you had hoped for as you sought what died long ago? There was no coming back from what took more than half of me. It was a promise to myself. To never look but to always run. Why would I re-invite you into a place that I've felt safer in alone?

Reviews

[Richard]

This is like a diary entry, from 1890, with a padlock on it and it exudes exactly that kind of pain and jut it's personal, it's direct and it's just right :)

[LETitBeKnown]

You're awesome

[Richard]

good stuff!

[Rob Santana]

Damn this a unique piece. This can have so many interpretations. I like this alot. Do have plans on continuing this poem?

[LETitBeKnown]

I hope to. Thanks :)