Golden Fingertips

A cute poem, for a cute moment or to set the mood.

Golden Fingertips 

As her long hair flows and she wriggles her toes;

Her golden finger tips take grip around my hips;

She pulls me closer and kisses my cheek

A faint voice in my ear comes in for a peek.

The whisper so quietly, I love you babe

Still surprises me ever so much to this day

I long for another kiss and I react slow

I feel her warm breath against my nose

I brush my face against hers as our skins touch.

Her skins so soft I can feel her blush.

Her finger tips full of adventure and rush.

Squeeze my butt and press it so much.

I like this, I love her, I don't want it to stop

She strokes my fluffy hair with her fingertips

As I kiss her softly on her lips

She is beautiful she is divine

Babygirl is forever mine

Reviews

[Andie]

How adorable. ^-^ What a sweet little poem.

[KeeD]

Haha, been a long time since i've felt that way :) you're adorable!

[KeeD]

thank you so much for reviewing :3

[Andie]

Lol thank you! :)
And your welcome for reviewing. It's my pleasure. :)

[}Echo{]

This is beautiful and sweet. It flows wonderfully. Great poem. :))

[KeeD]

Thank you :D, its kind of provocative but I couldn't help it :P I liked when she did that, "blush"

[}Echo{]

Welcomes. :D Hahaha, nice. :P

[Bronwen Cox Hollinger]

This is both beautiful and darling!

[KeeD]

:3 Just like you :) thanks for the review.

[Bronwen Cox Hollinger]

Awe why thank you!

[Frieda P]

This is like a young dance of the heart, very sweet and a little bit provocative. I've always loved 'babygirl' ;-)

[KeeD]

When I call someone my babygirl, she must be doing something right :P thank you for the kind, loving review. Much appreciated. xoxo

[NaomiJim]

Sounds like someone had a good time, haha. This poem is lovely. I like how you mention "Still surprises me ever so much to this day."
It's nice to find someone who keeps surprising ya when you think you know them.

[KeeD]

Haha sure does, thanks for the awesome review :) love your name btw.

[NaomiJim]

Thank-you :)

[Simply Watching]

This is a beautifully honest poem:) The part about you liking her squeeze your butt:) Very nice. But its still sweet and innocent at parts. It flows nicely and I think it is wonderful.

[KeeD]

Hahaha yeah what can I say, felt good :P #embarrassed

[Simply Watching]

Haha. Don't be. It made for a good poem.

[David the writer]

I loved this dude. Great job... you definetly did a great job here. The flow was great, like a song. The color witch between stanzas is gripping. And the words you used when you used them at the places you used them were great. Amazing job

[KeeD]

Thank you, appreciate the positive reviews this piece is getting so far. I'll be sure to check your work out, much love.

[Tasha]

I enjoyed this very much. I loved the fact that you made it two different colors, it was truly beautiful. Such a terrific write!

[KeeD]

Aren't you the sweetest, thank you :)

[Tasha]

Haha if you say so. You're welcome :)

[KeeD]

So what's your story Tasha, tell me more about you :) What inspires your wonderful write.

[Tasha]

I'm not really special, I just write about random things and whatever's on my mind. What would you like to know?

[KeeD]

I'm sure whatever you tell me will be interesting because you're a really nice person. Nice people are always interesting :), Fire away, Fire away. Anything you want to share about yourself. I just turned 23 on the 24th of November. I'm from India. Had a horrific breakup sometime ago, still trying to pick myself up. I've graduated from college about 2 years ago, still trying to figure out what I love doing, my path in life. Had a couple of jobs between now and then. I'm a Gamer by heart. Played games such as world of warcraft, league of legends and many more. I sketch, I write short stories, poems and I'm a real random goofy person. A dork by all means

[Tasha]

Okay, well I just turned 18 on the 26th of October. I'm in North Carolina currently. I'm a senior in high school. I love to read. I'd love to be a fashion designer. Ha I sketch a little too. I love journalism and hope to become a fashion journalist one day to combine the two things I love. I dance. I love music and I write poems a lot. I'm a very open person.

[KeeD]

A fashion journalist that sounds like a really fun job. Glad to know you have your dreams figured out. I cannot dance to save my life, I have two left feet. This one time I was out with my friends, we went dancing and this group of very cute English girls were dancing too. I had no idea how to dance, so I just boomeranged from one side of the bar to the other like back and forth and my friends are out there laughing and chatting these girls up at how funny and silly my dancing skills are. I guess I make an awesome wing-man when I dance.

[Tasha]

I love them both so much I can't choose. Dancing is not that hard. You know that saying practice makes perfect it really is true. I guess you do make a wonderful wing-man.