3 Poems about love/religion (Movie of our life, Fast Car And Jesus is my safety belt )

3 Poems about love/religion (Movie of our life, Fast Car And Jesus is my safety belt )

A Poem by KeeD
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A lonely Christmas doesn't necessarily mean a sad one <3

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*~~ Movie of our life ~~*

In the
 Movie of our life,
You are my heroine.
We are stars you know,
Can't wait till our story begins.


Like that Christmas I sat by the window
Looking down at the trees below
Feeling sad and so alone
Imagining a better time.


Sound of pebbles against the glass,
You called me down and we had a laugh
We took a stroll, there was a heavy breeze
Put my jacket around you so you wouldn't freeze.


In the movie of our life
You would make the perfect wife
Our wedding would be grand
Promise you, i'd always be your man.


If King Kong could Fall in love
And fight helicopters from above
I'd fight for you everyday
Take your side, come what may.


I know your love has changed me
Cause i'm a better man than I was before
You friendship has saved me, together
We have learned to love and grow


They will write a story on us one day
Maybe a movie to go with it
The greatest lovers alive, the billboard said
Hollywood's biggest hit


This is where my poem ends
Don't worry though our story just begins 
On the boulevard, your star will glow
For our movie put on an amazing show


~~~<3~~~~


Fast Car

I want to get to you as quick as possible
Times flying and it isn't flying my way
I'm racing down this highway called life 
and I see you at every exit telling me not to quit
Never give up Kee, you can win this race..
I'm yours if you come in first pla
ce
So I press on the throttle speed it up to max
as i'm zipping down this racetrack
Shifting the gears, fighting my fears
Commitment issues, scar tissues of the past. 
Life's a race, and If I want to win you, I gotta be fast.
I don't have the perfect car or driving skills to win
but with a prize to motivate i can't be late 
i'll seize victory and claim thee
My Fast Car seats 3
That's one for you and one for me
And one for my savior, the almighty.



Jesus my safety belt

Jesus can you please hear me out
I know I talk a lot of smack and weird you out.
But i'm honestly not hating on anything you said, 
I'm just you're creation left for dead.
In this
 clueless world I don't quiet understand.
Jesus help me, hold my hand.
I know your with me I feel you sometimes.
Specially when she talks I feel you working through her
I feel you in her heart never us fall apart.
Its like your taking care of me through her
I used to live in fear
But no more, none of that .. 
I feel more alive than I've ever felt before
Thank you for leading me to my baby's door. 
She took me in, she gave me love.
She sheltered me with kisses and kept my head above
The sinking sand this world is drowning in with sin
Jesus thank you for believing in,
me as I now believe in you.
Forever in my fast car there's a seat for you. 

© 2012 KeeD



Author's Note

KeeD
To all those lonely lovers out there this Christmas eve.
Not some of my best pieces, but I put it out there anyways <3

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Actually, they are pretty good in my book:) I love how you connected them all in a way, the thread that binds them being the girl. Beautiful work Keegan:)

Posted 4 Years Ago


Not some of your best pieces?? Are you kidding? I love these poems!
They're very creative and I like the rhymes. Well done! ^^

Posted 4 Years Ago


fills me with longing tis the reason I hate the holidays .... especially Valentines day lol even wrote a poem about it if you want Ill send you the link just let me know.

And now tonight is new years sigh ... I never make new years resolution's but this year I think I will ... I vow to kiss someone for the first time by the stroke of midnight

Brilliant write thought invoking

Posted 4 Years Ago


KeeD

4 Years Ago

"# sad didn't get to spend new years with ya' or get that kiss :(
Samantha ~virginpoet

4 Years Ago

aww
These are all good, I especially like the first one.

'If King Kong could Fall in love
And fight helicopters from above
I'd fight for you everyday'

Huge grin :D So romantic, it tickles me silly.

Not sure why you bundled these together, I think I would have enjoyed them more individually. You're jumping from one emotion to the next, there's only so much Kee I can handle! ;-) As always an interesting and delightful read.

Posted 4 Years Ago


KeeD

4 Years Ago

Just read this review, wow lol i love that i'm able to tickle you silly :P "huger grin" I didn't thi.. read more
Charming.

Posted 4 Years Ago


KeeD

4 Years Ago

:D Thanks
Wow. These are absolutely beautiful, almost brought me to tears. I really am not really a religeous (I don't think I spelled that write) person, but this was very well written. These were very good, and I'm glad you posted them. Best of luck to you. :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


~SouthernGirl~

4 Years Ago

Yeah. :) You are very welcome. They were very good. Good luck, and merry Christmas. :)
KeeD

4 Years Ago

Merry Christmas and hope you have a very successful and wonderful future full of happiness < 3
~SouthernGirl~

4 Years Ago

You too. :)
I love these. This is really cool. :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


KeeD

4 Years Ago

Thank you :P
}Echo{

4 Years Ago

:)
"not your best pieces?" -- maybe it is me but this is fantastic
Movie Of our Life - section:


Sound of pebbles against the glass,
You called me down and we had a laugh
We took a stroll, there was a heavy breeze
Put my jacket around you so you wouldn't freeze.


In the movie of our life
You would make the perfect wife
Our wedding would be grand
Promise you, i'd always be your man

-- wonderful use of imagery, capturing romantic longings
amazing flow

second fast car:

and I see you at every exit telling me not to quit
Never give up Kee, you can win this race..
I'm yours if you come in first place
So I press on the throttle speed it up to max
as i'm zipping down this racetrack
Shifting the gears, fighting my fears
Commitment issues, scar tissues of the past.
Life's a race, and If I want to win you, I gotta be fast.

--- very poignant imagery, your words eloquently captured

third: Jesus: My Safety Belt:

i'm also not religious but these lines stood out to me


Jesus can you please hear me out
I know I talk a lot of smack and weird you out.
But i'm honestly not hating on anything you said,
I'm just you're creation left for dead.
In this clueless world I don't quiet understand.

-- evocative of one dealing with loneliness and the frustrations of life, almost crying out..

all in all very profound, and powerfully emotional, every line, has its own unique beauty while weaving rhyme and flow through-out this entire piece. incredible writing, Keegan :) 100 to 100

Posted 4 Years Ago


ms. barrie

4 Years Ago

you welcome, you're an incredible writer, Keeg, never forget that :) -- wish i could have half your .. read more
KeeD

4 Years Ago

< 3 thank you so much! everyone on this site is amazing in their own unique style and way xox.
ms. barrie

4 Years Ago

you welcome so much and true :) x and o's
Oh goodness. Tears.
I don't consider myself a religious person, but this was just so beautiful. You did an amazing job capturing the emotions. As I said before, tears.
Man, I don't even know what else to say except these were some awesome poems.
< 3 xoxo

Posted 4 Years Ago


Andie

4 Years Ago

But like you said, you need your beauty sleep. Go to bed child!
KeeD

4 Years Ago

OH fu,ck yes we're both loads of fun xoxo :)
Andie

4 Years Ago

xoxo

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KeeD
KeeD

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