Lufarian's Shroud (Part 3 of the Elise Solberg Story)

Lufarian's Shroud (Part 3 of the Elise Solberg Story)

A Poem by KeeD
"

Elise continues her journey in hell, will she survive?

"

Lufarian's Shroud. 

 

Scorching heat as hell's flames arose;

The sound of hounds howling as,

Their blood thirst grows.

The word of a fresh soul has spread around;

The vilest of creatures rise from the ground.

 

Behemoth the fourth, prince of the dark

Arose from his throne and set his mark.

With a goats body and horns of steel

Through a war horn, a vicious roar did he squeal.

"Target the soul of the girl in the shroud;

Break her completely, let her cries be heard aloud."

 

To the east quarter was where Grenth dwell

For Grenth was the most vicious lieutenant of hell.

Out of the shadows his minion appeared

Black widowed spider with the head of a girl.

My Lord Grenth, with news I come forth

 An immaculate girl walks the forsaken corridor.

Rage filled his heart as his eyes burst with glee

Come Annaliese darling, dinners on me.

 

The rightful heir to the throne of hell

Lufarian was the devils son himself.

The beauty of Elise captured his wicked heart

He devised a plan that would crush any counterpart.

He beckoned his sister Lyssa the Cruel

Cut her wrist, and stood in the pool

Blackened blood made a vision appear.

Through it he whispered "Elise do not fear"

"It is I Lufarian, my voice; it shall get you out of here"

 

She followed his voice through a maze of rust and bone

Finally in hell she didn't fell so alone.

The end of the maze was in her sights, she set haste but oh' to her plight

She walked into a web.

A sticky mess,

To her distress, came a putrid laugh,

Followed by a sorrowful caress.

"It is I Annaliese, wench of the east,

It is time for you to die girl, on you shall I feast."

 

She wiggled and screamed, the fear in her eyes;

As the spider was about to devour her life.

Just then a pool of black blood covered her face

Lyssa had suddenly taken her place.

Elise my dear, you are safe and sound

Lufarian has defeated Behemoth and his hounds.

 

Follow the road that leads above ground.

You will find the well in which you have drowned.

Hell has chosen to spit you back out

For a mission you have only Lufarian knows about.

If you are lucky, you should get to thank him.

My brother, my lord, the son of sin.

 

Elise walks the path to the end

Her knees weak, her confidence rend.

Three evils out to finish her soul

Only to be pawn in the prime evils greater goal.

© 2013 KeeD


Author's Note

KeeD
Part 3 of a series of poems about a 15 year old girl and her horrific experiences. Any help, reviews, criticism appreciated.

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Oh what a great twist! Really good, Kee. Will there be more?

Posted 11 Years Ago


KeeD

11 Years Ago

yes its all up in my head gotta transfer it down to paper though :) part 4 and 5 should come out soo.. read more
KAOlmsted

11 Years Ago

I'm there. RR me as soon as. Really good work.
I love the imagery in this last stretch. Truly shows you want your readers to see where Elise is and where she could be headed. The web part brought me to the scene in the 3rd Lord of the Rings movie when Frodo is walking through the last tunnel at Mordor. And about the fire in the beginning, I could feel the heat in my mind and the flames. You're so creative...I could never describe such things as this as well as you can.

Posted 11 Years Ago


DoNt LoSe YoUrSeLf

11 Years Ago

Haha, thanks. I could be your motivation. Yes??
KeeD

11 Years Ago

Haha yeah with support and appreciation like this, the sky has no limits for me :) xoxo
DoNt LoSe YoUrSeLf

11 Years Ago

Sounds wonderful, I shall be your personal motivation then :)
I like how you've tweaked the form in every part...like there's a different form for every step of her journey...keep up the good work :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


KeeD

11 Years Ago

thank you :D i'll try not to disappoint, I'll repay the favor by reviewing your amazing work too, gr.. read more
kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

You're very welcome :D and feel free to check it out whenever you wish^^
Just like the other two, amazing. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


KeeD

11 Years Ago

thank you so much, i'll repay the favor and review your talented work as well, Gratitude.
Andie

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much, Keegan. It would mean a lot! :)
I really love this last chapter of the story the most.. although each was gripping..This one has very strong imagery and I like the images that you got rolling through my mind.. great work dude!

Posted 11 Years Ago


KeeD

11 Years Ago

Haha wicked, thanks for the awesome review. :D whenever you're free and want to bounce idea's, we ca.. read more
A cool horror write. Excellent tale, cool to read, is interesting and very creatively penned. Hope she can escape eventually or find a good spot in Hell. Cool pen upon this.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

KeeD

11 Years Ago

Thank you Eric, oh yes she does escape and without spoiling it, much more intense stuff to come! Tha.. read more
Eric Cox

11 Years Ago

You're welcome, and thanks!!! Looking forward to more. You're talented.
This was a wonderful and dark series that I enjoyed very much. Keep up the great work and stop downing yourself, you're a fantastic writer.

Posted 11 Years Ago


KeeD

11 Years Ago

Thank you, Appreciate your reviews very much, i'll get part 4 and 5 out soon :D!
 Tasha

11 Years Ago

You're welcome. I can't wait to read them!! :D

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Added on December 13, 2012
Last Updated on April 21, 2013
Tags: Horror, Story, Mystery, Rage, Love

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KeeD
KeeD

Mumbai, India, India



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Hey I'm Kee, I'm 32 and work as a journalist in Mumbai, India. I dabble in writing poetry and do it purely to pump out the creative juices in my being. Thank you for stopping by, live, laugh and love .. more..

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