Bonfires

Bonfires

A Poem by KeeD
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(turn your volume down to a mellow low) About time I put out something romantic.For those who've found happily ever after, this ones for you :)

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Bonfires

 photo Fire_of_Love_by_RedifineMe_zps8b7d3e6d.jpg

 

 

 Days are drifting astray

Light it ablaze, close beside you

Is where I want to stay

On the white sands by the Caspian shores

Looking at the night blend in with the waves

Fragments of shells under our feet

Fearless we lay counting the stars

Bonfires take us away

 

To jazzy skies of grey

Intoxicated by flames reflected in your eyes

Far far away I hide and seek, forever yours

Love like embers implanted in your cheeks

Your fiery smile in the cool breeze

Romantic music sets the mood to please     

Roaring with the wind, screaming your name

Chase after you through the seven seas

Bonfires take us away

 

To a mystical place where the moon and the sun       

Kiss and exchange glances, summer and winter romances

The life within a glimpse of an eye is an eternal lullaby

Put me to sleep, some dreams I forever want to keep

Your presence and essence with absence of doubt

Like a candle on a table shedding warmth out  

Bonfires take us away...

...Towards an endless love

 

 

© 2013 KeeD


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I saw the pic.the title and I KNEW THIS WOULD BE FANTASTIC WORK. There is something magical and romantic about the glow of a bonfire. The smell...the sparks...it inspires the heat of love.

To jazzy skies of grey
Intoxicated by flames reflected in your eyes
Far far away I hide and seek, forever yours
Love like embers implanted in your cheeks
Your fiery smile in the cool breeze
Romantic music set's the mood to please
Roaring with the wind, screaming your name
Chase after you through the seven seas
Bonfires take us away


I love how you ended every thought with the "Bonfire's take us away" such a fluid read. A favorite.

another thing..Put me to sleep, some dreams I forever want to keep" that saying is worth quoting over and over again...dreams and words to live by. xo

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Muse

11 Years Ago

only tweek...keep reading

...Because we love to the end

maybe instead;
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KeeD

11 Years Ago

let me know if this works :3
Muse

11 Years Ago

Yes!!



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this is an amazing write. There is something magical and romantic. great 100%

Posted 11 Years Ago


KeeD

11 Years Ago

Thank you :D indeed there is, a bonfire can spark up your love life :)
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CS
Sometimes I leave long winded reviews. This is not one of those times. Just one word...

Perfect

Posted 11 Years Ago


KeeD

11 Years Ago

Wow, thank you :)
What a great peice!

Posted 11 Years Ago


KeeD

11 Years Ago

Thank you < 3
Lover Of Words

11 Years Ago

Your welcome :)
A most romantic poem Keegan. Intense heat, raw power, being mesmerized by flames, is it any wonder that fire captures us and leads us to thoughts and imaginings of passion and love? I can hear the crackle and sparks flying here!

Posted 11 Years Ago


KeeD

11 Years Ago

Fire is the ignition to an eternal flame of love, I don't think people truly understand that the inn.. read more
Beautiful! I love it!

Posted 11 Years Ago


KeeD

11 Years Ago

Like yourself, thank you :D!
Be myself!

11 Years Ago

Thanks. lol. And your welcome. :)
I love bonfires, this is an amazing write. enjoyed the music as well

Posted 11 Years Ago


KeeD

11 Years Ago

Thank you Kim, so much!
Woooow. The words are written with fluidity. and the music! Oh! I love how it made it more fantastic a read :) What a great job :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


KeeD

11 Years Ago

I love that you appreciated the music as well, sometimes it tends to distract readers I hope this wa.. read more
eloquently written, imagery woven through this with your brilliant choice of words of the sweetness of romance and fulfillment of love is exquisite. not to mention, great rhyme and fluidity. wonderful job, Keegan :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


ms. barrie

11 Years Ago

You're very welcome, Kee. Oh very much so, i think it can be quite inspiring for an upcoming next ch.. read more
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ms. barrie

11 Years Ago

hearts to you as well, sorry, WC likes eating my hearts ha! ;)
Woah. This. Was. Breathtaking.
Is was magical and beautifully written, Kee. Aren't you quite the romantic ;-P
Very nicely down. Lovely flow. Very lucky girl she is :-)
Going in my favourites

100/100

Posted 11 Years Ago


KeeD

11 Years Ago

You're breathtaking :) Thank you
s y e

11 Years Ago

Anytime darling! ;-) The pleasure was all mine! You're amazing!
This is a mystical place, if only. My heart leaped and skipped a beat when I read it. Quite the romantic you are Kee. I love this...

jazzy skies of grey...just my cup of tea you know!

Lucky woman you wrote this for is all I can say, color me green. I love this to pieces! 100/100

Posted 11 Years Ago


KeeD

11 Years Ago

It isn't just directed at one woman :D It's for all the lovers out there who need to be refreshed ab.. read more
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Every woman hopes to get a love letter such as this as least once in her life, when you find your tr.. read more

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KeeD
KeeD

Mumbai, India, India



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Hey I'm Kee, I'm 32 and work as a journalist in Mumbai, India. I dabble in writing poetry and do it purely to pump out the creative juices in my being. Thank you for stopping by, live, laugh and love .. more..

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