Fly Butterfly Fly

Fly Butterfly Fly

A Poem by KeeD
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Just a feel good poem

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Acquire selfish composure

Too awkward in my own skin

Breaking through this enclosure

Trying to best the ugly within

 

I see you flutter and fly

Typical overachiever 

Reflective beauty to the eye

Making me a believer

 

Seeking the truth of existence

I acquire a pair of temporary wings

My conscience begs resistance

What does beauty truly bring

 

Created to be perfect

Always the prettiest sight

My mind filled with conflict

to vanities plight

 

Metamorphosis beckons me 

Promise to wave my insecurities goodbye

Awaken changed completely

 

Fly

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Fly

 

 

 

 

 

 


© 2017 KeeD



Author's Note

KeeD
Everyone has what it takes. Break free, spread your wings and fly~

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Featured Review

I am absolutely obsessed with butterflies mostly because they are beautiful and has positive symbolism~ This is a great poem and the creative words art at the end made me smle~

"Metamorphosis is the key element of butterfly symbolism. Butterfly as a symbol can also represent transition, celebration, and lightness. It can also symbolizes significant change in the course of one’s life, personality or way of thinking."

:)


Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

KeeD

5 Years Ago

Couldn't have said it better myself :) cheers for the cool review.
Shadow Paradox

5 Years Ago

Anytime ;)



Reviews

Butterflies are such inspirational creatures. Their time is so brief yet they go through a complicated difficult metamorphosis to don a pair of colorful, patterned wings to spread beauty for a little while. Could we learn from them? Perhaps we could try.
My favorite is the concluding verse here. You dazzle with your words Keegan!

Posted 1 Year Ago


KeeD

1 Year Ago

They are indeed so inspirational, I wish humans could learn more from them. xo Thanks for the revie.. read more
DIVYA

1 Year Ago

You are most welcome Keegan.
"Seeking the truth of existence
I acquire a pair of temporary wings
My conscience begs resistance
What does beauty truly bring"

I can sleep with this verse...

Posted 1 Year Ago


This is simply amazing, Sweetness & Light...it reminds me of someone, though...in fact, I can't see a butterfly now without it reminding me of a certain someone. Beautiful write.

Posted 5 Years Ago


its beautiful. Love the wing at the end ;-)

Posted 5 Years Ago


great thoughts , it is beautifull.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Really a Feel gud poem :)
ThankU for sharing such a piece, which can motivate us to open our wings...thoughts....and take our decisions and FLY..!! :)`

Posted 5 Years Ago


Such inspiration here in the tale of self awareness. Beautiful poem!

Posted 5 Years Ago


My favorite thing is Butterflies!! they are so awesome! Great poem!!

Posted 5 Years Ago


very cleverly penned and endearing poem, accompanied by a really great song!

Posted 5 Years Ago


quinfinn

5 Years Ago

you're welcome, and thanks for sticking your neck out for my Noodlehead...she is a source of light a.. read more
KeeD

5 Years Ago

Indeed she is, without her this site wouldn't feel quiet as homely as it does.
quinfinn

5 Years Ago

;)
Ooooooohhhhhh my! I love this poem to pieces and words. "Fly Butterfly Fly." Love it. A beautiful and absolutely inspiring heart-jerking poem.

Posted 5 Years Ago



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KeeD
KeeD

Mumbai, India, India



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Hi I'm Keegan, most of you talented people on here know me as Kee. I'm 28 and work as a journalist. I write to release bottled feelings, so although it might not be very good, it is me. Thank you for .. more..

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