Fly Butterfly Fly

Just a feel good poem

Acquire selfish composure

Too awkward in my own skin

Breaking through this enclosure

Trying to best the ugly within

 

I see you flutter and fly

Typical overachiever 

Reflective beauty to the eye

Making me a believer

 

Seeking the truth of existence

I acquire a pair of temporary wings

My conscience begs resistance

What does beauty truly bring

 

Created to be perfect

Always the prettiest sight

My mind filled with conflict

to vanities plight

 

Metamorphosis beckons me 

Promise to wave my insecurities goodbye

Awaken changed completely

 

Fly

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Author's Note

Everyone has what it takes. Break free, spread your wings and fly~

Reviews

[Shadow Paradox]

I am absolutely obsessed with butterflies mostly because they are beautiful and has positive symbolism~ This is a great poem and the creative words art at the end made me smle~

"Metamorphosis is the key element of butterfly symbolism. Butterfly as a symbol can also represent transition, celebration, and lightness. It can also symbolizes significant change in the course of one’s life, personality or way of thinking."

:)

[KeeD]

Couldn't have said it better myself :) cheers for the cool review.

[Shadow Paradox]

Anytime ;)

[LostandAlone]

I really liked this, it was very unique. It flows very nicely, and I like the way it's worded.

[KeeD]

thank you so much~ Butterflies are beautiful and so was your review.

[LostandAlone]

You're welcome. Thanks darling.

[misha]

Beautiful! I loved what you did at the end =)

[Elizabeth Porterfield]

Maybe I'm reading too much into this, but it seems like more than just a feel good poem to me:) It's seeking freedom from stress, from judgment, from any insecurities, and finding that in something or someone that you love, the butterfly in flight. Great work:)

[Ohhhwillow]

"Metamorphosis beckons me", I loved this line! Nice write, would have some more enjoyed describing words, close in on your surroundings and the reader will too!

[N!LoC]

omg i love love love......

[kublakhan27]

Imaginative and inspiring...fine work my friend.

[beautiful dreamer]

wow that was awesome keegan! great write!

[minnie:)]

wow that is a beautiful poem! I loved it, so beautiful, makes you want to fly if you ask me! AMAZING! great music to :)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Wow! Amazing piece. Your pretty lady's now a butterfly.
Nice choice music, too.