Fly Butterfly Fly

Fly Butterfly Fly

A Poem by KeeD
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Just a feel good poem

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Acquire selfish composure

Too awkward in my own skin

Breaking through this enclosure

Trying to best the ugly within

 

I see you flutter and fly

Typical overachiever 

Reflective beauty to the eye

Making me a believer

 

Seeking the truth of existence

I acquire a pair of temporary wings

My conscience begs resistance

What does beauty truly bring

 

Created to be perfect

Always the prettiest sight

My mind filled with conflict

to vanities plight

 

Metamorphosis beckons me 

Promise to wave my insecurities goodbye

Awaken changed completely

 

Fly

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Fly

 

 

 

 

 

 


© 2017 KeeD



Author's Note

KeeD
Everyone has what it takes. Break free, spread your wings and fly~

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I am absolutely obsessed with butterflies mostly because they are beautiful and has positive symbolism~ This is a great poem and the creative words art at the end made me smle~

"Metamorphosis is the key element of butterfly symbolism. Butterfly as a symbol can also represent transition, celebration, and lightness. It can also symbolizes significant change in the course of one’s life, personality or way of thinking."

:)


Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

KeeD

4 Years Ago

Couldn't have said it better myself :) cheers for the cool review.
Shadow Paradox

4 Years Ago

Anytime ;)



Reviews

This was a great piece Kee, a lovely title as well, so fitting. The music was really good as well, went with the write brilliantly. So many well written lines, it was touching and emotional. An little peek of our insecurities. I loved the ending, it was beautifully structured and colorful!

Posted 4 Years Ago


i love the theme of this poem, and you expressed it so creatively. The imagery was amazing as always and the music added a nice touch. Fantastic job!.

Posted 4 Years Ago


You knew you had me at butterfly. An insightful write of our own insecurities and seeing others metamorphosis without seeing out own potential, always hopeful yet feeling we'll never measure up. Human nature Kee, we think other's are so secure in their skin, but read any number of poets here and you'll certainly see otherwise...here comes the sun, it's alright my friend. Love what you did with the formatting to finish this gem up. Kudos, really nicely pen'd. xo

Posted 4 Years Ago


i really love the meaning/concept of this uplifting poem. very positive and reminds one to keep holding their heads high even through their darkest times. I enjoyed the originality of your words and your arrangement of them in each of the stanzas, as always. Brilliant job, Mr. d'souza, thanks for sharing! btw: also enjoy the music and the last line of the style format, very creative. pen on :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


I felt good reading it.

Posted 4 Years Ago



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KeeD
KeeD

Mumbai, India, India



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Hey i'm Kee, 27 years old and come from the culturally blessed land of India. I'm an amateur poet at best and I spill my writes out to music and current emotion. Leave a review and I'll be happy to re.. more..

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