In Lithuania, I met a siren

In Lithuania, I met a siren

A Poem by KeeD

Sitting by the shore in a white evening gown
Looking like an angel on unfamiliar ground
The waves come and crash against your feet
Out of the blue, our eyes begin to meet

The calm breeze conveys words whispered at me
I feel a magnetic attraction towards the sea
Awaiting the cold embrace of the water 
You smile my way like it was me you sought after

Your voice I feel it caress my ears
The most beautiful sound I've heard in all my years
Intoxicated by your melodic call
Slowly in love with you, I start to fall

With my head under water your voice still clear
I start to drown but there's nothing to fear
You comfort me into these deep last breaths of my existence 
Your kiss breaks any sort of involuntary resistance

I dreamt of meeting someone as magical as you
I lived long enough to have died having that dream come true
Now I remain in the depths of the dark deep blue
In love, I stay for an eternity with you

© 2017 KeeD



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Amazing and beautiful use of words and thoughts. I like the ending a lot. Thank you Keegan for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Months Ago


I loved this so much. It is by far one of my sweet favorites.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Another amazing write, its so romantic, romantic as hell haha, you seem like a true romantic, by the poetry you write, and it sure is breathtaking and beautiful.
I again, didn't love that the first few stanzas didn't rhyme ut the rest did, although it was still an amazing poem don't get me wrong. You are talented.
The lines you did rhyme, your rhyming was brilliant, doesn't feel forced at all, and I love poems that rhyme I think it makes a poem sound mpre poetic.
I do overall love your work, you have talent so keep writing :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


taking us once again to exotic places in the mind...keegan...

yes, i agree with barrie....an adult version of the little mermaid...

j.

Posted 1 Year Ago


KeeD

1 Year Ago

Thank you jacob my friend, love your visits to my page.
oy...your pen is on a roll keegan...this is stunning ink...speaks of wondrous,
romance that takes the reader away. can't possibly choose which lines are my favorite
reminds me of a much more adult version of the little mermaid. I could
be totally wrong but this seems like a lyrical ode to her. your word weaving
gently leaves a kiss on the reader's imagination. amazing write...
Thank u for sharing (: ~ X - barrie

Posted 1 Year Ago


KeeD

1 Year Ago

Thank you barrie, your so kind to me. I love this review and the way you look at this piece its incr.. read more
ms. barrie

1 Year Ago

you're most welcomed keegan. pleasure was all mine. I don't accept or send out r. requests but if .. read more

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KeeD
KeeD

Mumbai, India, India



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Hey i'm Kee, 27 years old and come from the culturally blessed land of India. I'm an amateur poet at best and I spill my writes out to music and current emotion. Leave a review and I'll be happy to re.. more..

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