Invoke an affair

Invoke an affair

A Poem by KeeD

To tempt thunder
and taste lightning
The world sunders
to a love so exciting 

Your spine is the river
I wish to swim across 
Every stroke uncovers
a star-crossed lovers loss

I feel the heat roaring 
within your volcanic chest
Your heart is soaring  
love no longer suppressed 

My restless ocean
I wish to drown in your embrace
Discovering new emotion
The pretty smile on your face

Through centuries past 
and centuries ahead
My kindred spirit at last
not much left unsaid
 
The sail is set in motion 
been put through the test of time
A heart filled with emotion
aching for the day you'll be mine

© 2017 KeeD



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This would have served as a song, Keegan. It is beautiful.

Posted 1 Month Ago


KeeD

1 Month Ago

Haha, do you have a nice voice? D: sing it for me! Thank you for the wonderful review. Did you ever .. read more
Mirror

1 Month Ago

I am posting page by page. so, yes i have posted another page. i want to spend sometime too to read .. read more
Oh this is so beautiful...I love rhyming and you are so good at it Keegan. My absolutely favorite verse:

My restless ocean
I wish to drown in your embrace
What keeps me floating
Is that look on your pretty face

Mindblowing and more!

Posted 2 Months Ago


KeeD

2 Months Ago

Thank you Divya, have a wonderful evening.
DIVYA

2 Months Ago

You too Keegan. It will be great to read you and I hope the weather is great in Mumbai
i like the near rhyme in the first stanza...really like the metaphor in the second...the spine idea...nicely done there...and uncovering what the star crossed lovers lost...that would be quite exciting, yes...
this is a mystical love poem.
j.

Posted 5 Months Ago


KeeD

2 Months Ago

Not one of my top pieces, but that you for the kind review Jacob.
exquisite imagery and briilant word-weaving. your pen painted a portrait of longings mixed in with myth. this is truly enchanting ~ thank you for sharing ~ X


Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

KeeD

2 Months Ago

Thank you for the kind review friend.

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KeeD
KeeD

Mumbai, India, India



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Hey i'm Kee, 27 years old and come from the culturally blessed land of India. I'm an amateur poet at best and I spill my writes out to music and current emotion. Leave a review and I'll be happy to re.. more..

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