Lovestruck

(Verse)

You play with a symphony 

of emotions crash landing into me

shipwrecked like a tragedy

waiting for the next best catastrophy

You say wait

I'm on it

Let me get you in my crosshairs boy

I'm like wait

enjoy it

My trigger-happy provider of joy

You know what you do to me

Bringing in that raw intensity 

Gunpowder still on your sleeves

running into the night like a bunch of thieves 

You say wait 

you've got it

That quickdraw shot to my heart

I'm like wait 

don't spoil it

You're still got to rip it apart

Heartbeat as it speaks to the bullet trail

I'm weak, you seek my heart's betrayal 

Lock the door, tell me more, I've heard it all before

Are you sure, you need more, am I worth fighting for

oooOOOOO...

You saved me

and you played me

I got a head for target practice

You got ahead to aim at me

Your shots are all infectious

You fell in love don't put the blame on me

oooOOOOO...

You saved me

and you played me

Heartbeat as it speaks to the bullet trail

I'm weak, you seek my heart's betrayal 

Lock the door, tell me more, I've heard it all before

Are you sure, you need more, am I worth fighting for

oooOOOOO...

You saved me

and you played me

oooOOOOO...

You saved me

and you played me...

                                  played me

Reviews

[FlatLineBeauty]

I would love nothing more than to hear you sing this. It makes my tongue and brain dance. This is one of your best for sure.

[Rebecca J Martin]

Omg... I HAVE to say, this is one of the best pieces of work I've yet read on this site!!! Among my love for creating many genres of art, I also love to sing... that being said, your words played right into my head with a musical party of notes!!! Most beautiful explanation of a love gone wild!!!

[Coyote Poetry]

Wonderful use of words and thoughts. Your words, danced into perfect poetry. A perfect poem for love. Thank you KeeD for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote