Insatiable

Insatiable

A Poem by Guess

Push you against the wall
slide my hand around your neck
as I stare into your eyes

mine & mine alone

Eyes fall downwards to worship your body
admire the curves
crave the skin

mine & mine alone

Eyes return to your face 
that look, I hate to admit it but it drives me crazy
I bring your body in front of the mirror

mine & mine alone

Place your hands on the mirror
pull your body closer towards me
two fingers in your mouth as usual

mine & mine alone

Drag the same fingers down your body
they find themselves between your legs
but I soon realize they didn't need to be wet

beg for me...

© 2019 Guess


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WOW. I love the raw vulnerability in this poem. something that requires courage not a lot of people have.
the attention to form and structure is also superb, and really gives me a sense of not WHAT your thinking, but HOW your thinking it. the slow, serpentine quality of the thoughts, seeping out of your mind, and onto page. 'beg for me...' is such a strong ending.
well done

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Guess

5 Years Ago

Lol thank u very much
Lucas

5 Years Ago

no, thank you



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A steamy and erotic write indeed.
I do think this sensual and explicit piece may need a mature rating?
The style is unusual but works well in this, although it may come over as somewhat mysoginistic in tone.

Posted 5 Years Ago


WOW. I love the raw vulnerability in this poem. something that requires courage not a lot of people have.
the attention to form and structure is also superb, and really gives me a sense of not WHAT your thinking, but HOW your thinking it. the slow, serpentine quality of the thoughts, seeping out of your mind, and onto page. 'beg for me...' is such a strong ending.
well done

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Guess

5 Years Ago

Lol thank u very much
Lucas

5 Years Ago

no, thank you

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