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Compartment 114
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Dull and Gray

Dull and Gray

A Poem by KeithKVH
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A poem that embodies the mindset of Alastor Bastille, the Leader of Altera Veritas, who is a main antagonist of my novel series, Legend of Mautau.

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In a world that's dull and gray
Standing out becomes a sin
It has not changed to this day
Thus I chose to sin again

The gods that control our life
Think only of their own gain
Achieving victory through our strife
They left me with nothing but pain

Innocence is an illusion
Change is possible if you only dare
To cast aside your confusion
And cease to care

I have no hope left inside
Only a desire to achieve my end
To forget like I was forgotten is what I decide
I need no family, nor even a single friend

© 2014 KeithKVH


Author's Note

KeithKVH
I suddenly felt like doing this. For being the villain he is, Alastor is actually a remarkable person who has endured much.

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definitely like the sentiments , a nice matter of fact write. easy to read and understand

good stuff m'man

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

KeithKVH

9 Years Ago

Thank you! Poetry is not my mainstay, but I felt like doing this. It was mostly meant to portray a c.. read more
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Jen
Excellent poem boy. keep it up!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

KeithKVH

9 Years Ago

Thanks. I don't usually do poetry but I've been looking through a number of poems since joining the .. read more
Jen

9 Years Ago

Good. Ya, Please share it at J Wing group so that more number of people can read it.

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Added on November 1, 2014
Last Updated on November 1, 2014
Tags: Fantasy, Science Fiction, Poem, Character, Original

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KeithKVH
KeithKVH

Pasadena, CA



About
I've been writing a novel series as a hobby for several years. I hope to write other stories, but for now just hoping to continue improving this one. **Just a note to keep in mind, everything here .. more..

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