Not Another Teenage Pessimist

He said, She said, He's dead.

Now everyone's screwed.

I know I am, how 'bout you?

You don't know?
Neither do I.

Nothing left but to do and die.

Do and die?
I won't even try.

Depressed yet again,

Not one to follow the trend.

I stay hyped up.

You keep being fucked up.

Yeah, I went there.

Wouldn't you, too?
Still don't know?
Well, f**k you.

Love...Compassion...

Don't pretend its the day's latest fashion.

You do nothin but deceive and betray;

And the truth wouldn't shine in the sun's brightest ray.

Do you know what these words mean?

Figure them out.

I'm done being the one telling you what its about.

The mind games...the tears...

I can't believe I told you my fears.

Eyes oh so cold;

Spoken words of comfort, generations old.

Did you follow a tape recorder?
Write and remember those lines?

I doubt you could remember the price of a court fine.

Now I'm harsh?
Now I'm cruel.

In, the end, you're the one who made themselves a fool.

I could overlook your indesretions,

But you won't overlook my imperfections.

So now I'm done with it...with you.

And all I have left to say is forget you, too. 

 

Author's Note

This doesnt have a real purpose, its just there.

Reviews

[Kenneth The Poet]

Deadly. Just deadly.

[Jonathan Ballam]

This is a great monologue. It has some real depth. I challenge you to write a new version of this that doesn't rhyme.

Oh, and for goodness sake don't stop writing, you're very talented!

:D

[Different Wings]

this is good! it surprises me that it has no purpose, because it certainly seems to come from somewhere. all in all it's really good, there are no particular suggestions i have, except to do more like it!

[Emily-Beth- add me =]]

thats really good!

[Coyote Poetry]

A strong and to the point poem. Sometime we need to be left alone to figure what is our desire and needs. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[J]

It was good :)

[Hello, Goodbye]

'And the truth wouldn't shine in the sun's brightest ray.'

I love that line especially but also the poem in its entirety.

[Kyle]

WOWZA thats good.

[Eternity_Wolf]

great write, your always amazing on how much emotion your able to incorporate into your writing ^^ seriously you should publish your stuff youd be like one of the next top writers , always do love your work ^^ *huggles* keep on makin more masterpieces ^^ oh and when u make it big can i belike a manager for yah ? :P lol jk much love to yah.

[Alisa_the_fluff_ball]

This reads like a song, and I'm in love with it. :)

"Love...Compassion...
Don't pretend its the day's latest fashion.
You do nothin but deceive and betray;
And the truth wouldn't shine in the sun's brightest ray."

Great f*****g job!

--Alisa_the_fluff_ball