these four walls

these four walls

A Poem by Kelso
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just a poem, i thought it was cool :D

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these chains constrict me

these bars hold me

these 4 walls are all i see

i am tired of being chained

tired of being barred

tired of these 4 walls

im ready to break free

im ready to live the life i want to

i can see it now, the sun, the sky

the green grass on my bare feet

the feel of rain on my skin

i know i will make it out

i know i will do it one day

one day.. one day... one day.... one day.... one day.....

 

one day will never come

for i am chained

and barred

and these 4 walls are all i will ever see

 


© 2010 Kelso



Author's Note

Kelso
hay, i would like some feedback please :D good or bad. how can i improve??

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Added on March 11, 2010
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