The Beginning

"In the beginning the clutter seems hard to manage and you don't know where all the pieces are supposed to go or what they even mean. But somewhere in the process of running away from it all, all the pieces that don't fit start to fall away and eventually you are left standing in front of something that was in front of your face all along."

Reviews

[Adam Adams]

You put some kinda great suspense in your words - the suspense that portrays someone's life full of darkness. Short, simple, yet very effective piece of writing. Great job!

[Justin]

that was really good :) sometimes not having all the pieces together is the best thing bc it gives you more options to find something :)

[M.E.Lyle]

It happens to me ALL the time. But usually I forget what I was doing before I recognize what I'm looking for.
You know, this reminds me of Genesis: "In the beginning..." Can't you imagine what a mess things must have appeared?
Love your style.