I miss you

A poem about a little girl I would sure want to meet someday

I miss you.

I miss someone I haven't even met,

someone who doesn't even exist yet.

I miss someone who will technically never be.

Still, I miss you, dear baby of me.

Reviews

[TheSweet]

This is the kind of poem to evoke all kinds of thoughts and different people would instantly read in different ways. Personally I took it to be the people you've not yet met, but when you do - will take for granted.

As for your story, it is a real shame. But where dreams meet reality is never really not true, it's just your thoughts being creative. And it's fantastic to see you have the right kind of mind to tackle this creatively with a poem and mature beliefs. Who knows that the future holds :) Thanks for sharing.

[Polaroid Impossible]

This is great. Baby can be taken in any way we wish to interpret. Well done :)

[CarrieFaeFuller]

Yep, that's what I was going for! Thanks for the review :)

[Rebbie Louise]

This poem is beautiful and so sad. You deserve applause for writing this so well when there is obviously so much emotion behind it. I will hope for you that one day you'll get a baby. I can almost understand your pain just by reading this

[zainul]

New technologies are emerging.
Your dream may come true soon with the help of those technologies.
The aspiration,passion and emotion expressed in the poem are fabulous.
No pity.
You deserve most sincere appreciation.

[CarrieFaeFuller]

Wow, that's really sweet of you :) thank you for your kind words! They filled my heart with warmth! Yes, perhaps with modern technologies, things won't be so bad after all. :) Thanks a million!

[zainul]

Have patience.
Many things that could not be dreamed of in the past are now true and tangible.
Thanks for your gesture.

[Patient Poet (Yos)]

You will have children of your own , you will find ways to give your love to babies that will not have love . your poem is touching ... but I know it will be with an Happy ending .... you will see your baby ... Just believe and it will happen xx

[CarrieFaeFuller]

Thank you for your kind words :)

[Whiskurz]

A very tender but powerful piece......Whisk

[ecept]

Short, powerful write.
Wonderfully expressed.

[Akshat♥]

short and sweet poem..
missing someone that doesn't even exist is kind of weird..
but a symbol of true love ..
feelings are feelings you can never fight with that..
Nicely done!!!

[solo2be]

Very beautiful writing, a short but really heartfelt poem. Great job.

[Lucky Bardwal]

Really Lovely writing!
I like whole wording.
Keep it up!
Do you read mine too Anguish and She..
God bless you..
Lucky!