Schizoid Infatuation

Schizoid Infatuation

A Poem by Kes

 

You're so beautiful in your strange and sad afflictions.

You're so tragic in your all-consuming addictions.

You were so enamoured with all these clashing contradictions,

That you conquered the world on the strength of your convictions.

 

What you see in the mirror's the wasted face of your reflection.

You brush aside the torment, in search of drunken affection.

You're trying to live your life without a hint of imperfection,

But you're living your life in the aftermath of disconnection.

 

You're so lost inside your wild imagination.

Your head is spinning from the rising acceleration.

You were so excited by your schizoid infatuation,

That you gave yourself over to their determination.

 

What you see in my eyes is the product of devotion,

Not the late nights and lazy days of a soul without emotion.


© 2012 Kes



Author's Note

Kes
Take a look at the picture. :)
Enjoy,
Xx

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I like the poem a lot. Had to read a few times. Such directness and strong statements in the poem.
"You're so lost inside your wild imagination.
Your head is spinning from the rising acceleration.
You were so excited by your schizoid infatuation,
That you gave yourself over to their determination."
No weakness in this poem. A strong close to a outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 9 Months Ago


Kes

9 Months Ago

Thanks. :)
K
A narcissists dream come true

Posted 10 Months Ago


Tate Morgan

10 Months Ago

lol I didnt know what you'd think of that comment it is what came to mind .I gaver it a 100
Kes

10 Months Ago

Thank you. :)
K
Tate Morgan

10 Months Ago

You are welcome I hope you are well
I'm at a loss for words. I love this!!

-nicole-was-here-

Posted 10 Months Ago


Very good!

Posted 10 Months Ago


Love this! Like how each line ends with a powerful word and they all rhyme. Great job!

Posted 10 Months Ago


Love this one, also!

Posted 10 Months Ago


"That you conquered the world on the strength of your convictions."

Posted 10 Months Ago


Destinyxi

10 Months Ago

I see that
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Laura Maidah

10 Months Ago

Haha, no. It deleted the long review I wrote. It just left the original quotes in the beginning. Hah.. read more

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