My Way

 

No way.

Don't try

to worm your way

out of this one.

You don't make stupid comments,

And expect me to shrug them off.

I'm not thick.

I can't believe you.

You need to change.

I can see.

But you're not even looking.

Open your eyes.

I'm not

stupid.

 

I'd fake it,

Just to shock you;

Just to shut you up.

I want to

make you

understand.

I will make

you see things

my way.

 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Good to try to change a wrong view. Hard to do. But can be done. I like the honest and strong statements in the poem. A strong ending to a outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Ink Angel]

This great anger brings out all the best words, these are flowing, welldone nice write.

[Monica]

You have done a great job in expressing your anger! It's well written, to the point, and strong. Everything it should be :)

[luna11]

I can tell your angry when reading this poem. Narrow-minded people annoy me, too. They're blind to the world.
Great poem
xx

[Suditi]

Nice write Kes.
It is direct, to the point and very profound.
Keep it up :)

[Neva Flores - Changeful..]

Some of my best writes have come out of anger. Well said Kes.

[:DI laugh too much:D]

this is really great. the poem isn't long, but you expressed your feelings really well within those 2 stanzas.

awesome job! =]

[Destinyxi]

Nice write, keep it up :)

[JZOZA]

I really like the way this is written, and set up. Good work.

[Whiskurz]

Straight and to the point....Good write...Whisk