Disorientated

 

Let's face it;

You've got no idea where you are.

You've got no idea where you're going.

You've got no idea who you are, do you?

 

 

I don't mind.

It's okay.

Take a breath,

Then step away.

Throwing yourself against the wall.

It's okay. It's okay.

Sick of the pain in it all.

It's not okay.

I know.

You're going to beat yourself to death.

Take a breath. Take a breath.

It's not okay.
I know.

Closing your eyes against the sunlight.

It's okay. It's okay.

You're going to drown in the cold light of day.

I don't mind.
It's okay.

Take a breath.

Step away.

 

 

Let's face it;

You've got no idea where you are.

You've got no idea where you're going.

You've got no idea who you are

at all.

 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

The picture words are true. Some people can't be fixed. I knew people aiming at death and destruction and they found it at a young age. I like the thoughts and the strong ending.
"Let's face it;
You've got no idea where you are.
You've got no idea where you're going.
You've got no idea who you are
at all."
Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Ink Angel]

Your going to beat yourself to death,take a breat take a breath I love the calming infuence, its ok its ok. A very powerful write says it how it is. Thankyou

[luna11]

I love it.
:D
The flow is good. I like the repetition of 'it's ok'.
Great poem :D
xx

[Revolutionary]

Perfect inner voice challengeing you to find yourself.Your inner voice is kind of a smart a*s though.Great poem.

[Corkee1808]

I really don't like repetitive poetry but this was a great one good job (:

[Monica]

Love the picture, its words are so true! Your poem is so well wrtten! I agree with Destinyxi, I enjoy how you are trying to calm the character down by saying "it's okay" and " I don't mind", you are allowing the character to be who they are, no matter how lost they may be. I love it! You did a great job :)

[Suditi]

The " its okay, its okay" makes the poem so amazing..
It is so real..
A brilliant write.

[Destinyxi]

I like it, a lot. Love how you're trying to calm down the character. Nice write