Pretty Thing

 

Beautiful, isn't it?

Prod it,

Poke it.

All broken in the corner.

Why didn't you warn her?

You had it.

You broke it.

 

Fanciful, isn't it?

Prod it,

Poke it.

All frozen in the moment.

Picking up the fragments.

You had it.

You broke it.

 

Pitiful, isn't it?

Prod it,

Poke it.

All cold in the corner.

Would you even mourn her?

You had it.
You broke it.

 

Beautiful, isn't it?

 

 

 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem is powerful. Tell a sad story. I do believe some cases are treated with less respect when the law had no concern. I like the flow of thoughts and the strong ending to the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Ink Angel]

Very clever kes, this goes so much deeper than the picture.

[queensonvia]

This is really great and I love the repetition! The progression of the poem along with the repetition is a great mix! Very awesome work! :)

[humahum]

very moving, deep write.

[Monica]

This is a great poem! I think the picture is perfect. I like the repetition, it adds a nice flow and feel to your words.
Well done :)

[Suditi]

The repetition is amazing.
The story of this band, sad. Plain downright sad.
I like the sarcasm in the poem..the tone of the poem.
A well written piece Kes.

[Ramya]

I love the repetitions....

"Prod it,
Poke it."
"You had it.
You broke it."

Good thinking and a different read:)

[Neva Flores - Changeful..]

Interesting......I can't help but think the poet speaks of someone's heart......

[Destinyxi]

Prod it,
Poke it.

For some reason, I like that part. Nice poem :)

[LokiLaufeyson]

This really hits home. Good job!