A Picture of Beauty

In my mind,

I never find,

a greater beauty,

than womankind,

 

With some ladies,

it's their mere words,

whilst with others,

the grace of birds,

 

Elegant and kind,

far sweeter than wine,

blonde or brunette,

I shall never forget,

 

That picture of beauty,

it is my duty,

to love and cherish,

never embellish,

 

A woman's virtue,

is a beauteous treasure,

and her desire for love,

is beyond measure.

Reviews

[Laura Nikkinen]

Well, thank you, I feel flattered and as I'm reading the previous comments.. I guess others do too. I'm a sucker for rhymes, especially for simple and minimalistic wording, yet on point in its own way.

[Jenny Nelson]

What a beautiful piece, and speaking as a woman, the sentiments are much appreciated.

[Vesa Lee]

Haha, very sweetly said.
If only I could always be as virtuous as this at all times...*smile*
Beautifully done.

[Last Lying Look]

Wow. This is AMAZING!!!!!!
"A woman's virtue,
is a beauteous treasure,
and her desire for love,
is beyond measure."
That was the perfect ending.
Great write!
-Elissa :)

[Briteskylar]

Wow that's amazing! It's so beautiful!

[Babbette Francis]

The way you view women is beyond any words to describe it. WOW!!
How should a woman go about reviewing such a piece... It's beautiful!

No woman is perfect but you summed up 97.9999999% of women with this stanza
A woman's virtue,
is a beauteous treasure,
and her desire for love,
is beyond measure.

I really had no idea men noticed just how deep a womans love is... but you said it...you saw it!! and that my friend, is the real beauty in this piece! I'm keeping this! Thank you

[Akina]

what a sweet poem.
great job!

[Nix]

Aw, how sweet! I have to agree with every word, even though they can be trouble. :) Thanks for entering this into my comp Julian. ~ Nix

[malmal412]

very nice

nicely written and worded i think.

[J.Black]

What a elegant write, Julian! Woman should be respected and loved more in so many ways one never thought possible.