Subtle Notes

When the subtle notes
in between are heard...
a quite serenity
steals over me

Kellyrose March 23, 2014

Reviews

[Shaquana Adams]

Cute. I thought of a haiku while reading this too. Good job :)

[Kellyrose]

Thank you : )

[Glen Yumang Manese]

This adds a punch...
yet as with a Haiku format...
less is more...
more is in the thoughts...
of the write...of what the reader...
perceives within the words presented...

[Kellyrose]

Thank you for reading my work; your words of encouragement mean a lot

[Glen Yumang Manese]

you're welcome...write on...