In This Battle

In This Battle

A Poem by KevinKevz
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When you are close to giving up but you have battles to fight. No one will help you, so be bold and wring your fright!

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There’s a storm in my head that keeps on damaging
A worst drought in my heart that persistently hurting
Nobody sees my pain and I am slowly drowning
I’ll be okay, this troubled water serves as cleansing.

Though I’m a withered tree in the middle of spring
I can feel my roots are strong to keep me standing
You maybe hear loud thunders and notice the lightning
But you never see me shine or at times that I’m crying.

Inside this solitude room, one soul is breaking
It's so dark and heavy like a cathartic feeling
I fell to my knees and rain came pouring
Out of the dusts and ashes , I will be rising. 

My thorns turn blunt and lovely petals are dying
I love to fly in the sky but what happened now I’m falling
Tired in catching my breath but I got to continue running
Lost in this maze of chaos, I found myself not moving.

Just like the rainbow gradually disappearing
I’m losing my colors and little by little I’m fading
Trapped in realm of despair, so fears are tormenting
Doors will soon be opened, I must keep on fighting… Keep on fighting!

© 2019 KevinKevz


Author's Note

KevinKevz
I can't wait to know your insights. Please let me know of your thoughts about this poem.
Can you relate to it? Then drop your comments. Thanks

Note: Credits to Kelly Sillaste for the picture.

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This is an exceptional poem. Explaining loud and clear and articulate what it's like to feel as though you are losing the battle of living and life. But how one own heart and soul. Let alone spirit can rise above everything. Even in those moments of deep darkness and distraught emotions you can fight those evil demons and with determination and faith within yourself overcome. And win another day. This poem really made me numb with so many emotions reminders of my own past and how this devil affected me. Kevin. You shared part of you in this poem. That others can and do relate to. And can actually feel how you felt. As they themself feel it also. In those vile moments of anguish, dread, fear and extreme upset. Facing the no return of humanlife.

Posted 5 Years Ago


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KevinKevz

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much Dawn. Life itself is a battle, we got to be our own soldier. It excites me that yo.. read more



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Very nice expressed. Our hearts are often in battle and sometimes it gets very hard.

Posted 5 Years Ago


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Rye
Oh WOW! This is so good and emotional, I could feel this write. SO well expressed,

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

KevinKevz

5 Years Ago

Thanks Rye!
Honestly saying.. This left me so speechless.. This type of writing expresses a lot about the writer..
I am a big fan of yours now

Posted 5 Years Ago


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KevinKevz

5 Years Ago

Thanks @Jasnil. We are on the same wavelength. I do like your works too. It's indeed that you can lo.. read more
Jasnil Chand

5 Years Ago

Yes for sure @kevin
This is an incredible good write and I'm totally buying your feeling behind the lines. I'm totally impressed with this piece which is oozing of feelings. A feeling which is totally relatable

Posted 5 Years Ago


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KevinKevz

5 Years Ago

Awwwwe, I'm speechless. I'm glad you were able to relate with it. I have to say you are incredible t.. read more
Abhishek Izy

5 Years Ago

As an artist, aren't we all incredible in our own rights :) :)
I liked how well spoken and genuine this was. You captured what struggle is like, and the hope we hold onto in the midst of it. The imagery you wove together told a story from different yet connecting images. That's a good way to really communicate what the experience is you're talking about. Like looking at the same even from different angles.

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KevinKevz

5 Years Ago

Massive thanks @JustinKH. It means a lot to me. I'm glad you appreciate this piece. :)
This is an exceptional poem. Explaining loud and clear and articulate what it's like to feel as though you are losing the battle of living and life. But how one own heart and soul. Let alone spirit can rise above everything. Even in those moments of deep darkness and distraught emotions you can fight those evil demons and with determination and faith within yourself overcome. And win another day. This poem really made me numb with so many emotions reminders of my own past and how this devil affected me. Kevin. You shared part of you in this poem. That others can and do relate to. And can actually feel how you felt. As they themself feel it also. In those vile moments of anguish, dread, fear and extreme upset. Facing the no return of humanlife.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This comment has been deleted by the poster.
KevinKevz

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much Dawn. Life itself is a battle, we got to be our own soldier. It excites me that yo.. read more

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