Losses

A poem from a lost soul

Has one ever felt the feeling of true loss.

Has one ever expirenced the pain of true death.

At 16 I did. I lost somebody very important to me.

In my arms infact.

An empty place opened in me so I filled the gap.

With another person very deserving, beautiful and talented.

Nobody understands why I love her the way I do.

But that's okay because as long as she knows.

I'm not telling you.

Author's Note

What do you think this is about?

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

"An empty place opened in me so I filled the gap.

With another person very deserving, beautiful and talented.

Nobody understands why I love her the way I do."

[Kevin Dean]

You quoted me. You have no idea how much that means. No one has ever quoted me.

[Sami Khalil]

You deserve it...You are welcome...:)................

[Brittany Zedalis]

This is a lovely poem indeed. Thank you for sharing.

[Kevin Dean]

Thank You for taking time to read it.

[Rachelle]

Thank you for sharing! Glad to know that you have moved on.

[zainul]

The positive thing is that you have not broken by the loss.
You chose a way to survive.
I may call it resilience in a personal crisis.

You may fix the typo- expirenced ---> experienced

[Kevin Dean]

Wow you guys all of you guys are amazing. I thank you for your kindness to my writing and know that I am working on a new screenplay that will be released on here soon.

[sushobhan]

A melancholius free-style poem of yours and commiseration is reflected as well. Thanks for penning.

[Kevin Dean]

Why thank you so much Mockingbird! Your exactly right about the message in this piece and I'm glad you got it. Thanks again for reading.

[Mockingbird]

sounds like even though we have gone through a traumatic experience there is someone out there to fill the void and help you feel complete no matter how much time has passed. this is an inspiring poem.

[Kevin Dean]

Thank you my friend for your kind feedback and taking time to read it :)

[Sami Khalil]

A sad and lovely poem at the same time...Thank you for sharing...:)