Untied

bury you breathe me take love leave me trust lost deceive me

heaven earth evening day night every late early eve dream

edge rush race back forward sears hurts breaks

fall climb fail lines reach slip cut ties

severed sight hearts hold tremble still melt mould

nothing all left at stake

silence spoken gone goodbye

tears dry hands hold

no more end me

 

 

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i like the way the words seem untied in this...as if they don't mesh, don't go together at all, almost like a disassociated stream of consciousness, but a closer look shows us that these fragments do very well go together...that we as humans are such contradictions, such paradox...

jacob