One Second After Death

A Poem by Kathryn Star, Shine!

Where will you go? Have you thought about that one thought?

Sounds disappear

Your body lay rested upon its grave,

An angel appears,

Are you going to Heaven or Hell?

Did you accept Jesus Christ,

Or a scoffer who said they could earn their way,

To Heaven's destiny...

Your own decision,

Clearly made all your life,

Don't be fooled,

It's crowded with religiousity,

One Word, One GOD,

That is where you can fall...

If you take the worlds view,

There is nothing beyond the grave...

Just one second

And you are dead,

Where are you going?

© 2009 Kathryn Star, Shine!

My religious point of view, and haters just don't even review. You already have your mind made up, and I don't want to read your rants.

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Doc Rogers

I could tell that when you wrote this your tank was somewhat full. There's an edge to the piece and to the supporting writing. I understand that edge. I have lived it more than once. :)

On the piece, I like the vertical and centered visual. For me it plays, it works. You may consider line spacing as a way to interject a pause for expression. In reading the poem I can hear certain places where pauses might work.

For me, it is not so much the styling of the poem as the content and the statement made. Oh, and the story crafting in it.

Overall, I liked it.

Cheers!

Posted 2 Months Ago

Sean Allen

Hey Kathryn, this was very well done.
I hope you have been well my friend.

Posted 4 Months Ago

WildeWhore

don't get so defensive automatically...

Posted 5 Months Ago

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Kathryn Star, Shine!

Somewhere between Heaven and Hell, can you tell me?

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I write novels as a profession. I am not a poet. All my poetry is just my thoughts and I don't profess to be anything but a beginner. I hate drama, I love the beach, hiking and camping. I love frie.. [more]