Love Injection

Love Injection

A Poem by Ziggy Jagger SpiderFromMars
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This is my first and only Villanelle. I'm a huge Dylan Thomas fan so I wanted to learn how to write one myself. This one is about my husband.

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Everything adored

Your eyes glisten like fire with perfection


Deep within your core

It was a crux in time that I fell for


You were tempting, bleeding with confection

Everything adored


Even though you watch dumb movies of gore

You won my heart without an election


Deep within your core

Leaving me breathless, begging for much more


You have stung me with a love injection

Everything adored


Constantly loving you, this vow I swore

I live for moments of sweet affection

Deep within your core


We discuss topics such as love and lore

I have never felt such a connection


Everything adored

Deep within your core

 

© 2013 Ziggy Jagger SpiderFromMars


Author's Note

Ziggy Jagger SpiderFromMars
Like I said I have never written a poem like this before so if I'm off just let me know

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A nice poem to someone who you really love......I like the repition of deep within your core

Posted 10 Years Ago


I really liked this.
Such a sweet poem for your husband.
Well done :)

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on November 22, 2013
Last Updated on November 22, 2013
Tags: Villanelle, Love, Adore, 2012, Injection




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