It Will all Fly Away

It Will all Fly Away

A Poem by Inaya Khan
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I was just feeling a bit depressed!

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So what if it ended?
It wasn't going to last forever anyway
You knew, that someday, he would walk away.
You were happy. You were content.
You also knew that this perfection had a dent.
You had no right to dream and build castles
Because deep down you knew it was all sand and hassle.
It was worthless -the love, the pain;
Only made you look upon yourself in disdain.
Why do you sit and crib and cry?
Your tears won't matter
One day, it will all fly.
And you won't even realise.

© 2016 Inaya Khan



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Words of wisdom...many realise this only after when they suffer....I really liked this one...

Posted 4 Months Ago


Inaya Khan

4 Months Ago

Thank you. I'm glad you liked it! :)
Najam Us Saher

4 Months Ago

You're welcome.
This is the perfect "keep moving because life sure as hell won't stop for you" piece, and I love that.
Days and nights fly by us whether we make the effort to overcome heartache and move forward or not.

"You had no right to dream and build castles
Because deep down you knew it was all sand and hassle."

Those lines stuck with me as I've been in positions where I've told myself such things before. I enjoyed reading this, it brought up nostalgic feelings for me. Good work, Inaya. :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


Inaya Khan

1 Year Ago

Thank you: )
Asante

1 Year Ago

Anytime. Keep the solid work up. :)
lovely piece of writing....the best part of poetry is that it helps in purging...good one...

Posted 1 Year Ago


Inaya, this piece really has the truth...
the exact thing we need to understand. I have been in there for a long period of time until my best friend encouraged me to move on....
Always remember, "If something is yours, then one day it will definitely come back to u, if it doesn't come then it was never yours..."
So don't waste your time being sad, something more special is waiting for you along the way... So try to get up and move ahead!!!
Anindita... : )

Posted 1 Year Ago


Inaya Khan

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much Anindita.😆
This means a lot to me. I'm glad you understood what I inten.. read more
Anindita Janhabee

1 Year Ago

of course.... it was a pleasure reading...
WoW!!!
beautiful message............
and this is the attitude to have.........
when everything will fail......time will heal all.......just hold on.....

very well rhymed.....
i really liked it!!!
:)

Posted 1 Year Ago


Inaya Khan

1 Year Ago

Thank you Pushkar. I'm glad you liked it
Pushkar Prabhat

1 Year Ago

you are welcome............!!! :) :)

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Inaya Khan
Inaya Khan

Bangalore, Karnataka, India



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Writing, for me is when I'm in the state of extremes of any emotion- depression, happiness, anger, joy. It just strikes. Next thing I want is a pen and paper and I'm good to go. Life gives me a lot.. more..

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