Lost in a storm

Lost in a storm

A Poem by Kiari Sabon

A strong wind swirls around me. I’m losing my mind. The darkening sky meets me and the spirits in me stir. Light strikes me and something binds me. Liquid jowls fall to meet my face and for a time my mind is mine once again but then it comes to an end. The sky takes me in. Now I’m full of sin. Are these thoughts mine. How can I go on? These souls in me are trying to change me. Are they there are the real or is it just in my head? Don’t come near I fear it’s too late. Go away! Go away! Don’t come near. I’m so full of fear. Help me please help me. I fear it’s too late. They fill me with their hate.  

© 2011 Kiari Sabon


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youi realy need to start formating these like a poem im sorry k. itsa the truth truth truth truth truth truth truth truth truth truth truth truth truth lol but ya need to Karai i mean really how long have we known each othere and your in what the 10th grade you know how to format a poem so do it right k my friend

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Haunting, intense, powerfull. Good Job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

thanks and yeah ill fix it soon

Posted 12 Years Ago


I really like this a lot. It is very intense, but it could be made so much better. I agree with what Shadow wolf said. You do beautiful work, but it could be improved greatly by formatting it correctly! ;)

Posted 12 Years Ago


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yeah how long has it been and its KIARI aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa and ill git 2 it later

Posted 12 Years Ago


youi realy need to start formating these like a poem im sorry k. itsa the truth truth truth truth truth truth truth truth truth truth truth truth truth lol but ya need to Karai i mean really how long have we known each othere and your in what the 10th grade you know how to format a poem so do it right k my friend

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Kiari Sabon
Kiari Sabon

morehead, KY



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Im broken its as simple as that but it seems all writers have seen the darkest and brightest moments being able to capture the hearts of so many. I can't bring myself to talk to those i should but whe.. more..

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