*blood thirsty blade

*blood thirsty blade

A Poem by Kiari Sabon

Give me your rubies.

Give me your life.

Give me all you need.  

Give me all you love.

Give me sip.

Give me a taste.

Give it all.

© 2011 Kiari Sabon


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The flow is very sharp, which goes great with this piece. "give me a sip give me a taste" are great.

Posted 11 Years Ago


I aint' sleeping tonight... Great piece though

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

if ur going to do it why dont u ur always writing about it why havent you done it

Posted 12 Years Ago


sounds a little needy girl. . . .maybe thats why and an answear to a question of yours??????????????? its ok again i like the format

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Kiari Sabon
Kiari Sabon

morehead, KY



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Im broken its as simple as that but it seems all writers have seen the darkest and brightest moments being able to capture the hearts of so many. I can't bring myself to talk to those i should but whe.. more..

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