Hold on buddy I got you

I got your hand hold on now.

Don’t let go you belong.

Stay strong for me.

Stay strong for you.

Hold on buddy I got you.

Let your wings grow.

Let your hopes flow

Hold on buddy I got you.

Your great its true.

Your fate its new.

Hold on buddy I got you.

Try something new.

Do something for you.

Hold on buddy I got you.

Reviews

[Joshua Design]

"Your great its true"? I don't understand this line at all. Perhaps if it said, "You're great, it's true." There is a HUGE difference between "your" and "you're". I think the ending definitely needs some work. I like the end of a poem to be powerful- something that could sum up the entirety of the poem in one line.

[Silent Knight]

I like this. :)