Turn you in our dance of sin

Eyes upon the flesh.

Teeth sharpened to strike you.

Death waiting to take on you.

But first comes our dance.

I listen to the flutter of your heart.

Eyes close upon the longing.

I, the shadow, step out from behind.

Then your head starts to spin.

I’m drawing you, pulling you in.

You find it easy to dance in this tune of sin.

I know the dance is over.

I knew I would win.

It’s over now, so I’ll make you my kin.

So you may always dance in sin.

(This is what you told me in my last breathes of life. But in my first breath of death you were never seen again. You left me alone to be cold and to dance in my own tune of sin.)

Reviews

[Chelsea Yates]

Dark and suggestive, time to dance in this tune of sin, very lyrical, loved this piece of poetry ;)

[Kiari Sabon]

thank you :}

[Chelsea Yates]

No problem :p

[Sami Khalil]

I listen to the flutter of your heart ... Very poetic...

[TC Dunn]

very passionate and dark. Love it. The dark side of human nature is always an interesting topic, and this poem is a wonderful example of it.

[Tina Kline]

Impressive! I love this, very dark and seductive. I really enjoyed reading this. Excellent writing.

[♪Kinnixk ♫]

Wow. I have to say this is one of the best poems I've read. It gave me so many ideas on who "I" is. Great job! You should post this into a contest.