Forsaken

Forsaken

A Poem by M.Kilani

Endless night
Endless light
Oh... how immaculate

Without your embrace
What a disgrace
A divine touch you can't replace

A dove and a hell hound
Whispering sound
Time to become your own solid ground

Try or die
Don't deny
A laughter followed by a sigh

Endless fight
Endless might
Oh... how accurate

No longer they matter
A goddess in your dreams
And a doll in the hand of another

And when joy is gone
you're back at where it begun
Missing warmth under the sun

Human parades
endless shades
time passes by as glory fades

Would you still stay
Or walk away
Today is tomorrow that we feared yesterday

Would you still wait?
Is time to curse fate?
Bury your ashes below your hate

No life to awaken
No gain to be taken
Once again, you are forsaken

© 2013 M.Kilani


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such a deep write and emotional.
This is rather wonderful really,
you made a powerful statement.
I think I just found my favorite poet here.
Enjoyed the read!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

M.Kilani

10 Years Ago

Thank you, i'm really flattered, and I'm really glad you liked the poem.
Thanks again,
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A sad but beautiful poem.
"Human parades
endless shades
time passes by as glory fades "
So many lines stood out. The above lines were my favorite. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

M.Kilani

10 Years Ago

Thank you for the review, it's always a pleasure to read your reviews
Yes it's very sad when t.. read more
Coyote Poetry

10 Years Ago

I agree. Send me read request directly. I love your poetry and thoughts.
M.Kilani

10 Years Ago

will do my friend.

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Added on April 8, 2013
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Amman, Jordan



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