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Natural disaster

Natural disaster

A Poem by M.Kilani

Where the night slept in worry
And the heart bled inside
And the blood spilled on full moon
Came no one to my help

When the love died in fury
And the world seems pale 
Death falls on all dreams 
Running from myself

Where the hope that you bury
Lives inside your mind
Scars leaking all guilt
Only death can comfort you

Can you sing to the wind
As it worships your eyes
Waiting to touch your face
Swarming inside your heart

All the burden I carry
Disappears with your smile
Knowing I can't be with you
Sadness fills my breath

© 2016 M.Kilani



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M.Kilani
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"Only death can comfort you"

Scary thought but true, I loved the tone of this poem!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow. 3anjad bezza3el (b6aree2a mnee7a) great job :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

M.Kilani

3 Years Ago

Thank you, yeah betza3ell bas sho benda ne3mal...
HungryGhost

3 Years Ago

andari
the pain of missing someone is evident in this piece. Well done.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

M.Kilani

3 Years Ago

Thank you.
Very good write. The imagery in here was amazing. I felt all of the emotion in her, especially the ending, which was perfect for this poem. Well done. :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

M.Kilani

3 Years Ago

Thank you, I'm glad you find it so, and I'm sorry that you've felt such emotions... didn't mean for .. read more
When the love died in fury
And the world seems pale
Death falls on all dreams
Running from myself.

Great one dear.....

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

M.Kilani

3 Years Ago

Thank you, I'm glad you like it.
I'm so glad I stumbled on your page to enjoy this wonderful write. There are natural disasters even in love. Excellent...:).................

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

M.Kilani

3 Years Ago

Thank you Sami, I'm glad you find the poem so, feel free to read more poems, it's a pleasure to have.. read more
Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)..........................
A powerful and sad journey in your words. When something we hold precious is gone. Leave us with sadness and disappointment. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

M.Kilani

3 Years Ago

Always a pleasure to read your reviews, I started to believe that you're the beating heart of Writer.. read more

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Added on May 6, 2014
Last Updated on December 28, 2016

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Amman, Jordan



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