Uninvited

Why can’t I sense the sun

Why am I forbidden

Why can’t I be the one

 

Why do I always stand by the door

When they like thieves steal her heart at night

Then leave her naked on the floor

 

Uninvited I am to her massacre

In which they killed her in the name of love

While I stand on the door and smoke my cigar

 

Lost I am , sick of every door I knock

Never I was asked in

Cold I became as numb as a rock

 

Uninvited I am as she’s either a friend or she has a man

Someone I can never get

Still I try I do whatever I can

 

And every night I lay in bed

Through my mind run their smiles

Their faces, their eyes are all in my head

 

He forsaken love and left it behind

And she sacrificed love for a friend who drinks wine

And I long for love I long for wine, and I long for a friend

I long for a cure for my cyanide

 

True I live in comfort, true that I don’t mind

But all that because I left sin behind

 

And now I seek burden and I seek pain

For a fact of life which is: “no pain no gain”

 

Uninvited I am to the house of sorrow house of eternal pain

Loveless, friendless, and in solitude I stand

In a world where emotions became a lie, I count stars and grains of sand

Away I stand at that door, as I wonder would my memory remain

 

Or under tasteless sun shall I forever be

Waiting for the one to set my soul free

Perhaps I shall join their sins

And kill the good man in me

Reviews

[Moonflower]

This was heavy and very well written.

[Coyote Poetry]

The pain and misery is heavy in the words. The story is lined with mystery. This would be a great opening to a book. The character is strong and have many issues to be fixed. A outstanding poem. You create many wild visions.
Coyote

[Aline S. Iniestra]

Great poem. Lots of wondering and thinking with pain that make this poem so touching and sincere. Very well done!

[A.A.Romanczuk]

Beautiful..filled with longing...but never kill the good man within...those things are not worth that...never stop seeking God..seeking eternal life with Him...

[nono]

"Why can’t I sense the sun
Why am I forbidden
Why can’t I be the one"

Now that part is beautiful!!! This whole poem is beautiful! I can see you really spent your time on this!!

[Michael X]

wow, phenomonal job M. you put such a mighty emphasis on emotion,
i clealy enjoyed reading this poem, and the imagery ad tragedy so cold
and comes to life. keep up the great work.