Fantasy

 

And I’m still awake

Another dawn about to break

And I still breath into the night

And await for the sun light

 

Only to retain her scent

To remember each second we spent

Still I stare to the darkness I gaze into the air

And I dream as I strangle like a doll in her hair

 

And I think as I drink

And I mourn as I sink

Was she too blind to see

“What about me? “

 

And I light one more cigarette

To remember her sparkling eyes

As I smoke packs so I don’t forget

And to forget the way she cries

 

And I’ll turn all rainbows

To match her smile

I’d give away my elbows

And walk thousands of miles

 

And I’ll light her all candles

With the fire of my heart

How much would it handle

If it’s ripped apart

 

I’ll play her all the songs

All music that she longs

And sing her till she sleep

I’ll never make her weep

 

And take her tears away

For her I shall pray

She’ll be my cigarettes and wine

Too bad she isn’t mine

 

All I’m left with is a memory

As I drown in my fantasy

Too bad I’m not meant to be

Reviews

[GBU POETRY ONLY]

Fantasy has an effortless flow that's intermingled with bittersweet sensories & memories ... Good beginning verse ... My favorite phrases although a little fierce are "And I dream as I strangle like a doll in her hair" & "As I drown in my fantasy" ...
I liked the use of the non-traditional ending phrase ..(not using WE'RE not meant to be) Overall, an easy piece to flow thru ... Good job! GBU