October

October

A Poem by M.Kilani
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Published in the book of "Jordan Poetry : The Departure"

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Waiting for the winter … a reason for me to feel that cold
Waiting I am … for tears washing drops of rain
Waiting I am… for a cold breeze for physical pain
Waiting for the winter … waiting for words that are still untold

Waiting I used to be and wait I will till the last breath I hold
Waiting I am … alone once again
Waiting I am … for a cigarette under the rain
Waiting for the winter … for a silence walk in an empty road

And came October and winter is still late
I miss those clouds hiding sky and sunshine
Why am I waiting how long can I wait

Still it is October the month of mourn and hate
I miss standing outdoors when rain falls in my wine
I lost the hope of summer and my believe of fate

By Mohammad Al-Kilani · Monday, October 13, 2008

© 2010 M.Kilani


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beautifully explained,nice efforts, read mine too " QUEST OF LIFE".


Posted 12 Years Ago


waiting is a postime that won't go away

Posted 12 Years Ago


I love the fall time of year and you took me there.

Posted 12 Years Ago


hmm, i reallly like this, i mean winter is the best time if year for me, i just love the snow and stuf, but yeah the meaning for winter is fairly shown and i know i can relate
Really good work here :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Evocative and eerie...nice1 :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


I love the changing of seasons but as it gets closer to December it becomes a sad and dark place it seems. You captured it well in this piece. Great write!

Posted 12 Years Ago


this is good


Posted 12 Years Ago


I have to disagree. I believe October is more morbid then sad. That's just me though. I was born in October so I'm bias.
Nevertheless this is a good poem.

Posted 13 Years Ago


A lovely combination of Dark and Chilly. Enjoyed. Keep writing.

-Wella

Posted 13 Years Ago


TRAGIC my friend! The seasons really can bring along its own baggage and it can't be helped or stopped. :(

Posted 13 Years Ago



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