Dying will

Dying will

A Poem by M.Kilani

 

 

For all who once sought death

For all who had the will to die

Even those of dying will

Come along, join the crowd

 

Join the crowd of hopeless ones

And walk along, it’s not so far

Not further than home

Or is it really that far

 

Come and finish the undone dreams

To the world of never-ending time

World of no posers world of no mime

World where silent are all screams

 

World of make belief

 

Come along and seek no love

Seek no power, power of arm and mind

Where none rules from above

Where true stands the mankind

 

Come see Babylon of no sin

City of angles city of no hell

But wait they’ll never let us in

For all we share a spell

 

For all we gave up hope

For all we surrender to death

And death we sought we shall find

And we all carry stones

 

From the world of no belief

 

Toxicated minds, tar stained hearts

And scared skins of our fights

Hopelessness, spacelessness , and no forgiveness

Darkend emotion, no devotion, and more precaution

 

All along with guilt and fear

Alone with our dying will

Along with our will to die

 

Yet we have the key you’ll find it here

Under the emptiness you fill

The truth beneath the lie

 

The forgotten hope , the smile from the heart

The love you already have

The mind of your own

All are there once you believe

 

Believe in tomorrow, and remember yesterday

Never a day more, unless you throw memories away

Only then you shall be whole, only then you’ll get in

You are already in promise land , as long as you don’t give in

© 2010 M.Kilani


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Peace and calm in a life takes great effort. Each of us have our limits and goals. I knew a few who found death and left misery. I believe we need to go back to the old way. Family must hold the one's who need help and be there for them in good and bad times. The family support system is necessary. Some people can't see the good in a day. Sometime we must give kindness and love and hope we can open there eyes to the new day and possibilities of opportunities. A powerful poem. Fear can be gather easily in a world with little kindness.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Strong and deep and almost very convincing. I liked your precpectives in this write. Good write.

Posted 13 Years Ago


When we find the will die, we find the strength to live...
A wonderful poem, sir, as always

Posted 13 Years Ago


and we shall NEVER give in ;)
reminding me to appreciate the things in life. the love you already have
the person you are

Posted 13 Years Ago


very deep meaning... so heartfelt
the last stanza is just amazing.
beautiful writing from beginning to end
splendid :) i adore it

Posted 13 Years Ago


very very deep poem...intriguing meaning...

Posted 13 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a very beautiful piece~

Posted 13 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Amman, Jordan



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