Reflection

An old poem that has been published in the book of "Jordan Poetry: The Departure"

 

Mirror mirror on the wall

A piece of you made my heart a hole

 

Yet here I am hard I try to stand tall

Here I am harder I try not to fall

 

Here I stand and lean against the wall

Weak I try from my death fall I crawl

 

Alone I am no one I know no one I call

 Helpless I bleed, and drain my soul

 

Mirror mirror on my wall

I’m sick of waiting that angel to fall

 

Ugly I am now I’m aware I can see it all

No more you fit my face, now ends your role

 

No more you can please me, my smile you stole

No more you can draw my face using coal

 

Mirror mirror off my wall

No more light you left to lighten this hall

 

If I can’t see what is your goal

Reflect no more, break, shatter and fall

 

 

Reviews

[Winters_Lost_Walk]

Beautiful combination of a fairytale with real life. I especially love the part saying "No more you can please me, my smile you stole". I managed to paint a picture in my mind of this vision. Emotions in this writing are in depth though not that clear, which make them even more realistic. Love the flow and rhyme in the poem. Nice work!

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Love the powerful, mirror mirror usage to get depth into the poem, excellent :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Sometime hope and wishes can be lost in the mirror. Better to act and hope for a good outcome. I like the flow and the feel of this poem. A very good ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote