Eyes Wide Shut

Eyes Wide Shut

A Poem by Kimberly Smith

 

Eyes wide shut
No love, pain to glory
Poor to riches fucked up played out story
No moral or meaning
No AAA expression from FINING
I swear im clean
Again
Cocaine makes me sane
Not  a party outlet of confidence
Its just like oxygen
I need it
DON’T  just look at the damn words
F*****G READ IT
Right now the room is silent and I hear my heart beating
Repeating the same beat
Doom doom doom
S**t im doomed
My sweat becomes comfort from something human
God doesn’t answer my prayer when im in this gloom
I think the devil sleeps in my room
With his eyes wide shut
Another bad trip
Now my mind is playing tricks
Im not goona say it cause I know you want it
To lay back in touch myself under this bad judgement
Then my trip turns him on
The s**t seems so wrong
But it felt so good
Like it should
His hands rubs my tigh
While his closing my eyes
Now all wrongs are sounds
Hours and hours go by
Coming down
Look around
No one there just a empty room
With a can and a spoon
Again the devil must have slept  in my room
Too bad I missed him
Ran out of luck
Bad trip
With my eyes wide shut

© 2009 Kimberly Smith


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Kimberly Smith
just another day

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Wow......I've read through quite a bit of your writings and all I can say is....INTENSE! Your style is no style, uncommon intertwinings of reality, and quite frankly, leaving me breathless.
And yes, that's a good thing. Keep it comin'!

Posted 9 Years Ago


lol, well it's my opinion that true creativity appears when your high. I liked your poem by the way.

"No one there just a empty room
With a can and a spoon
Again the devil must have slept in my room
Too bad I missed him
Ran out of luck
Bad trip
With my eyes wide shut"

"Just another day"

Posted 9 Years Ago


Very vivid.. the painful energy is felt thru this .. this was a excellent trip you took us on.. from the first to the last word you had me transfixed...

Awesome..


Posted 9 Years Ago


Hey Kim. Very intense subject & write. The picture you painted was all that! I likes....gotta read more from you.

Posted 9 Years Ago


i write while im fukt up most the time...
its just doesnt seem like you party hard...

my faverite line...

"With a can and a spoon
Again the devil must have slept in my room
Too bad I missed him"

Posted 10 Years Ago


wow. Really intense and awesome imagery. Nice work :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

great write i really enjoyed this one ...well written

Posted 10 Years Ago


the mistake in this poem i decide to keep even tho i notice..i was high well writing it soooo lol

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice...I can relate...in a sense to all references. I liked this piece.

There were a few typo errors

These lines"

Im not goona say it cause I know you want it - Goona is misspelled. Should be gonna
To lay back in touch myself under this bad judgement- Preposition of in is wrong. It works with dialouge, but with properness it should be and.

His hands rubs my tigh-- I think you meant thigh for tigh.

I love the sexiness of this piece. It's beautiful.



Posted 10 Years Ago


I really enjoyed this piece. Great ending!

jkb

Posted 10 Years Ago



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